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May 12, 2006
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To breathe peace,
True solitude.
Calm the waters
And feel something
Breathe in.

Safety, quiet,
Whatever it is
Nothing torments,

To escape
Cruelty and hate
Crushing terror.
Breathe out.
One of the two crappy poems that wrote themselves. More or less. I know, I was going to post them a week ago, but I'm gonna go ahead and space them out a little. That way I can post again in a little bit, since I can't scan anything in at the moment.

For the record, I hate trying to classify these things. I put it in Horror/Macabre (yes, again), because that's the best spot for darker stuff... despite the fact that this particular poem really isn't horror-filled or morbid. But it is somwhat angsty and lonely, so this--unfortunately--was the best description I could find.

Also, it's fixed because I bothered with rythm and meter, but didn't use a formal style. It's a little too organized for the 'open' category. ...There's organization...count the syllables, or something. Alright, I'm done whining.

...Open to interpretation. In fact, I'd sort of like to hear your interpretations. I'm curious.
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Chronoline Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2006  Hobbyist Photographer
i like it....i should get around to putting some of my poems up one day, one glorious day
k-hallowseve Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
One glorious day... :P

You should do it; I don't know anyone (personally) who regularly posts poetry.
Chronoline Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2006  Hobbyist Photographer
i have to find my orinted versions though, my computer crapped itself so i may have lost all of my old work
poetry, stories and art
k-hallowseve Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Urk! That's horrible. I know what that's like >.< Some things will be lost forever.
Chronoline Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2006  Hobbyist Photographer
hopefully i can get something off my hard drive but maybe not.
k-hallowseve Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
They have programs available to salvage stuff from your hard drive, but I have no idea how much they cost and such.
Chronoline Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2006  Hobbyist Photographer
hmmm...must salvage. My masterpieces noooo! ahh, they weren't all that good, but i could make them better damn it!
k-hallowseve Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, I'd look into it... unless you want to start over... >.< That really, really sucks.
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shadowmonster Featured By Owner May 17, 2006
Feild of paper flowers. *PASHING!* Oh looks i'm in your brain now, whatcha gonna do?

AHem, sorry. That was random :B
k-hallowseve Featured By Owner May 17, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:rofl: Where did THAT come from? That was random. But it made me laugh.
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