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Cradle yourself in darkness.
Screw your eyes shut tight.
Try to forget that he’s right there,
And pray for endless night.

Just curl away in the corner,
And try to ignore your plight.
He already stole everything you had;
You’ve no reason left to fight.

If you could push it all away,
Then things would be all right—
Escape to the sanctity of your mind
And hide in fields of white.

Crawl away into the shadows
Evict him from your sight:
Try to escape his demonic face
And filter the tragic light.
The other of the two crappy poems. Hope you enjoy it; if not... eh, oh well. I tried (sort of).

I could rant about the catigorization like I usually do, but I feel I've made my woes sufficiently clear on that particular tangent.

The line structure is semi-inspired by the limerick style, but it's not the same. I do what I want.

It is whatever you want it to be. It means something specific to me, but I'm not you. Make of it what you will.
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Digicowboy Featured By Owner May 17, 2006
Yeah, that's kinda creepy...Very good poem though, just don't read it it at the birthday parties of small children.
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k-hallowseve Featured By Owner May 17, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, now I've got an idea... *mutters to self* ...wonder when that little brat turns 6...

Thanks! Any interpretations? I'll try not psychoanalyze your response... :D
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shadowmonster Featured By Owner May 17, 2006
That's terrifying. Seriously.
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k-hallowseve Featured By Owner May 17, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really? That's what I was going for, but... you never know how it's going to come off to someone else.

Got an interpretation? My morbid curiosity wants to know. :P
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shadowmonster Featured By Owner May 18, 2006
Fear, anger, confusion. Because some prick can't leave (possibly child) her alone.

Sorry, if I go on I'll rave. Even now I'm thinkin' "Prick prick prick prick DOUCHEBAG FARTMUNCHER." when reading this.

I think you catch what I'm saying. Not the poem, the subject is why I said scary.
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k-hallowseve Featured By Owner May 18, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sorry I got you worked up! ^^; Now I'm creeped out... :o

Now I'm kinda hoping you'll rant, though. Like on which part made you feel that way, etc.
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shadowmonster Featured By Owner May 21, 2006
No worries, but it's just one of those things that I dispise and loathe entirely (not because you said it).

"try to forget he's there", "forget he stole everything you had", and "demonic face" say it all. Nobody should have to suffer because some sick bastard figured he can get away with hurting someone. (I just see this more as an abused child though, most likely from watching CSI a little bit ago...) I cannot understand how someone could do something like that, but any sick asswipe like that should get what he desirves. Innocents should always be protected.
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k-hallowseve Featured By Owner May 26, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
...

You're right. That IS creepy.

And yes, I agree--Hell's reserved for a certain brand of people, for sure.
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color-grey Featured By Owner May 16, 2006
ah, more blistfull poems.
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k-hallowseve Featured By Owner May 16, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Betcha didn't even read it, did you? ...Ya butthead. :giggle:
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